Birds watching the road
as their wings soar with delight
Road trip across town.
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Michael_Malachi – The 6’6/Giant
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beautiful and I like the picture too.
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Hey thank you! 😊😊 Wanted to add some art to it. Lol 🙏🏽
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My pleasure. I really like it, Michael.
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Thanks! 😊❤️
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pleasure 🙂
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Haiku is just something I’ve been able to grasp. It’s nice to see someone has and done a wonderful job with it!
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Thank you so much! Haiku’s are fun to do, and stretches the imagination! Glad that they’re coming along for you. 👌🏾
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I agree with Tim. I dont do haikus but youre great at em
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Thank you so much Alexandra! Hearing that means a lot to me! ❤️
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whats the rule? I wanna give it a whack i think. first line is 5 syllables or something like that? second is however many and then the third is the same amt as the first?
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Yes, I’m not a guru, not at all lol, but the general basis is a 5-7-5 syllable count. I’ve seen some that didn’t follow this rule, though. There’s different forms of haikus. Usually it’s the 5-7-5 rule, and it focuses on images of nature. This link explains it soooooo much better than I do:
https://poets.org/glossary/haiku
I’m horrible at explaining them, I’m sorry! Lol 😂 Hope this helps though!
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so i think it is
five syllables to begin
and then five to end
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Oh look you’re a natural! 😂😂 You got it!
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no for real, i had to count many times on my fingers. and i think the second line might be 8 so… idk lol still fun tho!!
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No you got it down packed!! The second line is perfect! But right?!! They’re so fun to do!
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they are!! im gonna practice more! 😀
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Cool good luck and have fun!! 😊 Let me know how they come along! With how fast you picked up on it, I know they’re gonna be great!
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of course i will let you know! And i might get lucky a few times but its not my thing. i stick to narratives ugh lol
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Maybe a narrative haiku? Lol that would be soooo cool! Lol
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lmao how would that work? ugh youre challenging me and i must accept
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Woot woot, challenge initiated! I’m not sure, I’ve never read such a thing! You’ll be making something new. Now we gotta see how this turns out. Lol
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lol its gonna turn out vague lmao
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I doubt that! lol It’s gonna be awesomeee!
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You know I’m going to like anything with a bird. 😉🥰
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That’s awesome! ❤️😊 They’re beautiful lil things! 🐦 🦢 🦅 💙 Perfect symbols of freedom.
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It’s starting to cool off here so we will start birding a little more with fall migration here. Great haiku! 😊🦉
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Thank you so much, Lisa! Ps..stay warm! Lol it’s getting cool here, as well!
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It’s not cold here in Florida but it’s cold in the northern states so the birds are on the move down here. My AC is still on. Ugh!
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Oh wow! Lol Living in Ohio, I couldn’t imagine still having the AC on in November! Lol
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Welcome to my life! Good news though. This cold front is going to make it down here & we will at least turn off the AC & open the windows for more than one day. Woohoo! 😊
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Woohoo that’s good news! Lol Get a nice, little vacation from the heat! 😀 If I could pass on some of this cold to you guys, I would in a heartbeat! Woke up this morning to our first day of snow this season! Say hello to all the lovely birds for me! They’re the wise ones. 😀
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I’m not sure I want your cold. It is a beautiful sunny 62 degrees but the 13 mph wind makes it a little chillier. No complaints here! 🌞
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Omg that sounds lovely, and with a nice breeze! I don’t blame you, no one wants the cold! Lol
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